Читаю бесконечно длинный фик по тинвафле - и честно, не понимаю, зачем я это делаю. Сюжет хороший, и написано все складно и гладко, но ощущение отвратительное. Герои - все до одного, клянусь - говорят цитатами из учебника по психологии для первого курсе. Ей-богу, кроме шуток, мой психоаналитик так со мной не разговаривает, иначе я бы честно сошла с ума.

цитатаNot that he needs to, when Laura raises an eyebrow at him and says, “I’m assuming you’re here for Derek?”
“You are correct,” Stiles nods, licking his lips.
“To fix things between you two?”
Stiles doesn't think this is really any of her business, but he figures if he was in Derek's place, his friends would do the same thing.
“If that’s what he wants, yes,” Stiles says quietly but firmly, and when Laura looks at him like she’s expecting more than that, he adds, “I just want him to be okay. I came here to tell him he doesn’t have to worry about risking bumping into- into Kate while he’s in Beacon Hills and that, for me, nothing’s changed between the two of us. I want him to feel safe, and I want him to be happy. And if that happens to involve me? Awesome. More than awesome, actually.”
“And if it doesn’t?” Erica is the one who asks him, face impassive.
“Then that’s okay, too,” Stiles says honestly, even though his stomach drops. “I’m not going to say it won’t suck and I won’t be heartbroken about it, but after I explain everything and tell him I still want this? Still want there to be an us? It’s his decision to make, not mine. And if he doesn’t want anything to do with me? Then I’m going to respect that.”
Stiles hadn’t really planned on giving them a speech, but he figures they have a right to ask questions.
You know, considering the state Derek was after his sisters came to pick him up a week ago, and how they’re the ones who took care of him later.
So all he can do is be honest, tell them how he feels, and hope that’s enough for them to see that all Stiles wants is what’s best for Derek.
What Derek thinks and knows it’s best for him, based on his own choices after he hears what Stiles has to say.
Even though the decision to listen to Stiles in the first place is a choice in itself.
Stiles hopes Derek will be okay with seeing him.

Двадцать глав психоанализа отношений в терминах популярной психологии. Они так думают, они так говорят, они так действуют - это реально выносит крышу. Автор, наверное, начинающий психолог.

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